Tuesday, July 27, 2010

I Wonder by Otsile Phalwane

I wonder
If he knew I have been thinking of him
I wonder
If he knew I have been caring for him
I wonder
If he knew I am loving him more than ever
I wonder
If he knew I have been watching him
I wonder
If he knew I can feel him
I wonder
If he knew in my dreams when I sleep I keep him close to me
I am thinking
His the thunder of my lighting
I am thinking
He is the only one who can make me melt
I am growing
Close to him more than ever
I am glowing
With all the floor of happy laughter
I am sailing without a destination exploring changed place with him by my side

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

the concept of this poem is very interesting but am worried by the continuous use of "I wonder" doesn't that slow down the pace of the poem?

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